Oct 26, 2017, 11:59 PM

@faraday I've mentioned this before, but I like my descs to say something about the character rather than just describing them. I don't always manage this, but for say... a swashbuckler, I might use more purple prose (while trying not to go overboard, because that definitely gets old fast), but a by-the-book pilot might have more of a just-the-facts description. Word choice is big for me here.

I also have problems where the PB is never -quite- right for what I picture in my head... maybe the character has facial hair that the PB doesn't, or they don't have facial hair that the PB does, or maybe they have a nasty facial scar that the PB doesn't have (and my 'shopping skills aren't advanced enough to add).