Apr 20, 2017, 6:49 PM

I don't actually think forums like this are particularly good places to get general feedback on broad theme-building concepts. I find the write-up pretty interesting, but that's just due to my tastes (and my want for off-brand fantasy, not just another L&L game). Ideally, you do theme-building brain-storming with a few close friends/possible potential staffers or potential alpha players, then bring stuff to a larger group once you've got some concrete ideas you're committed to.

ETA: Although, for serious, don't split up a playerbase on your new game.