(I think this is the right place, yes? If not feel free to move @Glitch.)
So I'm revamping the chargen on Wildcard, trying to make it a little bit more streamlined, a little bit prettier (according to my standards, at least). The person who made it originally is awesome, but I want things to be in Cobaltasauruseese. >.> Anywise, part of FAE/FATE is setting up your appearance. So I figured I'd stick it into the first room. This is what I have, is it good? Is it bad? Any suggestions? Changes?
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You set your appearance in two ways with your @desc and your &short-desc. These two items allow
people to get an idea of what your character looks like on a daily basis.
@desc has many different styles to it, on Wildcard we prefer a shorter to the point style. Your
@desc should have a base description giving height, hair color (and length and style), eye color,
general complexion information, body type, general demeanor notes, and basic clothing. We ask
that you try to keep it no more than 5-7 lines worth of text.
@desc me=Maribella is average height (5'6") for a woman with long blonde hair that usually
hangs in loose curls over her shoulders. Her eyes are a sparkling blue full of life and joy. She
usually smiles broadly and easily to anyone she meets. She's slender but not quite skinny.
Normally she dresses in expensive fashionable clothing that include pants, a fancy blouse, and
high heels.
&short-desc is a very short description of your character. Put only the things you think are
important into it.
&short-desc me=5'6", blonde, cheerful, expensive clothing.
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