@Arkandel said in Roleplaying writing styles:
On the contrary I've learned to associate brevity with subpar roleplay. It's largely a bias, I'll freely admit it, and there are definitely players who can pull it off. @Coin, for all he's a blight on this world, can make every word count but most people can't get away with it. There's also a stigma about it being a sign of distraction such as when someone's playing on multiple scenes and just churns out a quick pose once in a while.
I can't help but feel 'brevity' is bad. This is just personal taste, of course, and I'm sure it works for some people.
On the other hand, I agree with @Arkandel entirely in that by /no means/ does verbosity mean someone is good. Anybody can vomit out 5 paragraphs if they try hard enough (Protip : Tempest's #1 obvious sign of a verbose, shitty roleplayer, they write paragraph after paragraph about how special and awesome their character is and manage to add nothing to the scene, somehow.)
I just have a hard time remaining interested for long if you can't /at least/ give me 2 paragraphs every pose. Because, tbh, you're probably not giving me a lot to work with. And honestly, that might be more a flaw with me. Or it's just different tastes.
When I hear 'brevity' I just picture those Elysium-sort of poses we're all familiar with. Or people who will just pose "She smiles." or some other 2/3/4 word action in every pose they write. Yes, we all abuse those small gesture, but like...give me some flavor please. "She laughs and flashes a cocky smile at Jane after the woman's comment." Not just "She smiles."
I am definitely an elitist in terms of RPing styles.
Random pet peeve. People who don't seem to understand that you can combine an action and dialogue into 1 sentence with a comma.
She smiles. "Hey Jane." She looks around. "Where is everyone?"
She smiles, "Hey Jane." She looks around, "Where is everyone?"
Something about that genuinely bugs me and will make me think less of you.